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Mackenzie's avatar

Wow, I loved this so much 💛

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Joel J Miller's avatar

This is great. All our stories are constructed; it’s just that we don’t realize that and assume because they seem intuitive and automatic they must be true—as if our shitty first draft is better than the one we get a chance to sculpt and edit.

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Ray Edwards's avatar

This is one of the most liberating beliefs I have become aware of.

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Nicole Holland's avatar

I’d challenge you and them to write it a third time for bonus points, making the “hero” every character other than themselves. ☺️

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Ray Edwards's avatar

That sounds like a dandy idea!

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